First rough edit
Just a little something to give you an idea of what it’s going to be like. The titles are there to indicate what narration will go with which images. First partial rough edit of Letters in the Sand (about 4 min, 5.3 MB): letters_rough_edit1
May 29th, 2009 at 1:44 pm
I thought your work on tuesday was really engaging, way more so that some of the work we saw with voiceovers. Your cinematography was beautiful. I especially loved the section about how water is divine and so being on an island is like being surrounded by the divine. I also wanted to comment that I was glad you put the high school scene in slow motion.
I know I may be just repeating what others said, but the only part I would take out is the shot of the doorknob. Everything else was great and I wouldn’t change it.