Mtg. 03-16:
In attendance: Chandra, Sean, Sorrelle, Hammer
It has been an incredibly productive last several days here for Slug on a Rug!
We had our W.I.P. on Wed., where we distributed surveys (based of focus group samples) and had the class give us feedback on what little soundtrack we had completed assembling at that point. Very helpful feedback overall — we tallied the results of the questions and on average, 10 out of 13 questions varied between “Strongly Agree” and “Agree”, which was validating! In all, our class found the sample to be interesting, amusing, unusual, and clear. The only 3 questions that had a 50/50 outcome pertained to whether or not we should include more music, if there was a variety of jokes, and if those jokes were offensive, which reflected our expectations for those responses, anyway. We are also divided at this point as to how to best feature a musical element, but more than likely, it will be used in a transitional context and for intro / outro credits.
We also got a lot of individual feedback on the surveys. While they were generally supportive and helpful, there were some remarks that would have benefited from more specificity (i.e. “more funny“, “could be written better“, etc.), but in all, they gave us a lot to discuss and think about. The two most prominent issues raised by the class were that of Zee’s voice / look, and Sarfraz’s look.
Six people in class stated that they had a problem with Zee’s voice. Of those six, four had a problem with the combination of Zee’s voice and physical appearance (the other two cited pacing problems). After a surprisingly brief discussion, it was decided that we’d keep Zee the way she is, as we love her this way. She defies people’s expectations of what she should be, like Dr. Girlfriend from Venture Bros. or Alice from Superjail. She is what she is, which is a strong, intelligent, empowered (if not to the point of preachy), feminist female who likes ladies. If her look seems weird, it’s only to point out the strange hypocrisy that can occur when a person subscribing to one ideology subconsciously adopts the mannerisms of the very cause they’re fighting against. In Zee’s case, it’s her extreme dislike of all things male that is hypocritical, for as she points out all the problems with masculine assertiveness and aggression, she embodies these qualities herself, to some extent. (At least, she does for now!)
BUT, we did take a second look at Sarfraz, and agreed with the four people who thought Sarfraz should be “hella aliened out”, as one survey said. After trying several different voices with Sean, he is now doing a hybrid of Jennifer Coolidge from A Mighty Wind, and Kermit the Frog. It’s kinda sassy, too, and has Sorrelle and Chandra laughing a lot now. Sean just has to re-record all Sarfraz’s vocal tracks.
(ALSO — someone misspelled Sarfraz on their survey (Xarfraz), and we liked their take better, so we’re now changing him to Xarfraz. It ties in with Xylonia better, too. Thanks to whoever came up with that one!)
Speaking of vocal tracks, Slug on a Rug hit a milestone last night when it knocked out four scenes’ worth of vocal soundtracks and completed the soundtrack (phase 1)!!!!! Woo-hoo! At this time, the vocal track of the episode runs 12 mins. 49 secs., which is where we wanted to be (and way less than the previously assumed total of 17 mins.). If we can keep it under 13 or 14 mins., we’ll be in good shape.
So, in all, the W.I.P. went swimmingly, and much of the feedback was put to use in one way or another. We may move on to some animating this week, as we simply cannot wait.
Until next time…!




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