So I ended up sticking with my original title and I’m not a huge fan of it but it serves the purpose of introducing my potential readers to what my paper is going to be about so that’s all that really matters I guess.

But anyway, I still haven’t done a whole lot with my paper since the first round of revisions because I feel like the criticisms I’ve received were along the same lines of what I planned on doing besides what my peers thought. I’ve added some more elaboration and explanation as well as more of my own personal feelings towards each topic I bring up.

Overall I’m feeling pretty good about my paper and I think it has been an interest challenge for me because I’ve never had to write a creative essay.