Last Wednesday’s writing workshop was very much helpful in me rearranging my essay. I believe I have this same feeling with every Wednesday workshop. I always enjoy them. I think a common activity every year is that I am provided with a clever way to fix my essay and then the next year I forget about it and have to remember it all over again. My paper was in the stage where everything is on the paper, but it makes no sense in connection with everything else.

I chose to be part of Group 1: Revision. Involved in the worksheet was a system that I had first learned about last year during Fall and Winter quarter.  The system was to look at an almost finished essay and number them. Each essay is summarized by subject and then later rearrange the paragraphs to make the subjects make sense. I decided to be meticulous and take a long way around. Once the paragraphs were rearranged, I rewrote the paragraphs word by word and smoothed out the edges.