Work-in-Progress
Thank you to all who gave me such thorough and insightful feedback today. Many, many good ideas were offered; I certainly will follow through on many of them. These include: sound levels in v/o; reshooting my on-camera monologue (in film? not sure about this), reconsidering how much I use the count-down, considering more layering in the section called, Time, shooting a dawn to dusk time lapse in film, continuing the musical direction I have taken (no, nothing was done in Garage Band yet!), not appropriating any Hollywood film material (the confusion over the “cowgirls” was significant in that I do not want the viewer to assume they reference another film), leading the v/o before revealing my face, and completely reworking Immortality (last section) once I have other sections closer to completion.
“…though several experiments were successful, it was almost impossible to repeat them.” P.D. Ouspensky